Your enemy

Watching the movie
of your life and there’s
your enemy repositioned as
the hero
he’s a maverick
standing center
sympathetic
and she digs him
noble
pauses
and all.

Comments

4 responses to “Your enemy”

  1. kim Avatar
    kim

    Yowza! This one is super fantastique.

  2. heroic imp Avatar
    heroic imp

    Hits home, that’s why I have to make some noize’a. Good , good, stuff, and more.

  3. YS Avatar
    YS

    I’m really digging this one, too, and man-oh-man how I hate my enemy. That jerk gets all the breaks. Only trouble is, I keep reading it that YOU (CV) are watching the movie of MY life, and it’s MY enemy that’s now the hero. And so I wonder, Are you having a snicker at my expense? ‘Cause if so, that ain’t right!

  4. cecil vortex Avatar
    cecil vortex

    jinkies — I have to think about that, YS. I definitely meant it the other way. But I can see your reading completely. And now I have to decide which one I like better……
    -CV

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