Back to back

My 3-year-old and me
back to back at a
Route 5
pee shack
and there's this mighty roar
pours out his two-foot frame.
The rush of my doom.
As I'm flushed
out the room.

Comments

3 responses to “Back to back”

  1. Barbara Avatar
    Barbara

    I’ve read this 5 times. Enjoyed it more each time. One of my favorites.

  2. Kim Avatar
    Kim

    Equally boisterous and poignant. Bravo!

  3. Itto Ogami Avatar
    Itto Ogami

    i laughed, i cried. i had pee envy.
    after watching ‘revenge of the sith,’ i hope that your 3 year-old’s pee power will be harnessed to fight evil, and not manipulated by fox news and the dark side.
    “So this is how liberty dies. With thunderous applause.”
    —George Lucas, Senator Amidala in Star Wars: Episode III: Revenge of the Sith
    yeah, those state of the union standing ovations are loud.

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