Not a snake

You say I’m a snake but snakes
move with purpose, right?
They lead with their head. Reach
with their mouth. Draw a
dry belly line with an impulse dotting
each turn.
Have you ever seen a snake tumble? Or trip? Or twist?
Not a snake.

Comments

4 responses to “Not a snake”

  1. So-Called Bill Avatar
    So-Called Bill

    Who called you a snake? I’ve always thought of you as more of a monitor lizard. Or maybe Gila monster.

  2. Itto Ogami Avatar
    Itto Ogami

    i liked ‘dry belly line.’
    as a british commando during the cold december of 42, i witnessed a snake tumble, trip and twist as we raided the bordeaux harbor. that snake, like the german s.s., was no match for our limpet mines.

  3. Cecil Vortex Avatar
    Cecil Vortex

    SCB: I agree. I am more like a monitor lizard. For example: my relatively high metabolic rate (for a reptile). And my sensory adaptations that benefit the hunting of live prey.
    IO: lovely.
    -Cecil

  4. George G Avatar
    George G

    This is a great po-po, Dan-Dan.

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